Other than the fact that this isn't really Industrial, it's pretty cool, but you need to drop this elsewhere.
That's so fuckin' 80's dude. Also, seems like you have a nice digital setup. I'm sure you have a nice little recording studio.
Downloaded and all!!! Glad you extended it!
YO i added lyrics to it cheak it its called cascade!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I did have a problem with the base, the quarter notes seemed very lacking, and way to loud. I couldn't hope but zone in on it and forget about everything else. I also didn't like the sound you chose for it, I think a dark and deep digital sound would work better for this than an Analog. Didn't like the ending either. It just kind of fades out, not great or extraordinary. Really kind of made me sad. Other than that is was almost perfect!
Not download material in my opinion.
Artist to Artist,
pm me about end then, how would you like the end then ? :)
It was good but...
Seemed fairly repetitive, with the same basic line throughout the entire song... But it was overall a pretty good song. I just don't think a 4 minute song can live with the same basic synth line, even if it's twisted a little bit here and there.
yes i do have a problem with that lol. i'll try to get out of that habit. thanks for the review!
Not too bad, The sound quality didn't seem top notch, but It was good. It did transition nicely though from verse to verse. A job well done I'd say.
Sound Shift Expedition
I composed this using Finale 2009, and I have no real experience with audio tweaking. I just write the music. Hopefully I can offer better quality sound in the future! Thanks for the review.
The sound quality was horrible, and it seemed the drums and guitar were off a bit here and there... Horrible ending, doesn't sound country either. Need new recording equipment and more practice. I think I also heard a dog barking in the background...
DJ Zeaklous has this same song, just more ambient, shorter, and in my opinion, better. Look up- Dj Zeaklous's song "Star Dancer". It's the same thing. If this is your work that he added to, then lemme give a review.
It needs more verses, more sounds, and more life. It really needs a climax.
Do I hear a metronome playing? or is that popping and clicking from the sliced tracks? It could just be my speakers though... If not, you really need to remaster... ANYWAYS!!! KICKASS SONG MAN!!! Very nice instrumental piece, could use some almost screamo death vocals though.
Doesn't sound like you did anything...
I swear, the guy below me is telling the truth... It's all ripped from garageband, especially the drums, my dad used those...
The beggining is also a little to harsh, and the sudden jump in to the main melody is a little annoying, it's also to short...
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