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Did you make this in three minutes?

Because it isn't all that great. The notes you used to make this four second loop just sound very... abnormal? I don't know. A loop in my opinion should at least be twenty seconds long though. I don't like it very much, including your drums.

dooseyboy responds:

i made it in like 5 minutes, i thought is sounded cool.
i'm still experimenting with FL studio, so i will start on a longer song soon

Since you don't have a review...

I thought I'd go first. It's pretty good but I just didn't find the vocals very good at all.
They didn't go very well with the melody you were playing (my opinion). It also seemed to long and repetitive. I'd like to see stuff from you that's totally original, not just remixed stuff. 4/5 8/10

Artist to Artist,
Gaige Barrett

DjMontana responds:

HEy sse..

Ohke so that`s actually funny because when i was always posting tracks with
most off my own influences i got the feeling people don`t like them.
And here you are telling me exactly the opisit...so ....

I also agree, because i want to make tracks with my own played tunes.
But i see that u are a bit like myself in the opinion off the use of a dj`s own influence in tracks :D..wich is a Good thing.

thnx for Comment&Rating.

Greetz DJMontana

It's OK...

Not download material, it really needs to be much longer and and have a few more variations in sounds. It needs a different drum loop because it just doesn't suit it at all, It also should have no drums at some points to bring out it's ambience. Your key placement with the wave sound was off a bit at times with your main melody and the stopping of the main melodies playing, sounds like my computer is skipping your track. You just need practice or just definitely need to revise it.
----SUMMARY----
1. Make it longer, any song with balls is at least 3:00
2. Vary this piece with more sounds
3. Use different drums and sometimes none
4 Take out some of the skipping of the main melody
5. Fix some of the key placement with your wave/ambient sound
3/5 7/10
From Artist to Artist,
Gaige Barrett

Hmm...

Kinda gave me a headache...
At the beginning the base drum was a bit much, then it comes back and it's like all I hear. I don't like the melody very much and the constant volume change is a total drag. I'll give you a couple things. It's very unique, and has a nice set of sounds, It could do with a few more parts because it seems to just bleed on.

Pretty Good

It had pretty good sounds and fit in very well. It was done well and sounded great, but any song worth its balls is at least 3:00/three minutes. I was waiting for it to really blow me away, but it didn't. I'd really like to see this extended. So 4/5 and an 8/10.

From Artist to Artist,
Gaige Barrett

I like everything you make.

Just can't get enough. I listen to your stuff after, before (on my mp3 at) school. (Don't tell my teachers though). Best artist ever.

borgx responds:

glad you like his songs :) to bad it doesnt reach the top of newgrounds though :P

Pretty Kickass

But it would be better if a minute longer.
I love the variation in sounds and the way they fit together.
ALSO you have to watch this on the puddle background. Iv'e never seen it turn into a tidal wave before.

Keep up the work,
Gaige Barrett

You can pick up my album, "Electronic Mind" on Amazon mp3!

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